She needed to play. She needed to touch the cool surface of the smooth ivory. The keys beneath her fingers would soothe her aching heart. Sarah was dead. Despite everything she had tried to do to help her through this; Sarah was dead. The child was dead too. Her feet hurried along the hallway to … Continue reading Flash Fiction: Grief
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Beta Reader Feedback
At the end of last week I received the first feedback from one of my beta readers. Let’s just say that I expected a fair amount of areas to be pointed out that needed improvement (it’s my first novel after all), but I didn’t quite expect it to be on the level of re-structuring and … Continue reading Beta Reader Feedback